the two maps below show an island, before and after construction for some tourists facilities.

Essay topics:

the two maps below show an island, before and after construction for some tourists facilities.

The two maps displays the difference after constructuon of some tourist facilities on the same island.

Overall, the island has been used magnificiently after the significant construction done to attract tourists. The Island is now fully equipped with all facilities which a tourist have in his mind to have a peacefull and natural getaway.

The isand has 15 rooms for accomdating the travllers, surrounded by trees and have enough space between the two rooms, so the guest can enjoy there own private space without getting disturb by other neighbour guests. Out of 15 six rooms are very close to beach and the rest 9 roms are constructed in a circular format. Each room is well connected by footpath which leads to the beach, restaurant and reception.

The island have one restaurant and is very close to sea which add a scenic view for the guests while having there meal. The island provides enough activity for water lovers like beach for swimmers and faclity is available for sailling too. A vehicle track is connected to reception which leasds to pier.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01675977654 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64150714579 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2575044764 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236556612656 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959671969003 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098531960887 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167273903885 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10392369442 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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