The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided maps illustrate the situation of an island where the first one exhibits the before appearance and the second one shows after construction of several tourist facilities.

In the first map, we can see there are several palm trees on the island and a beach is marked before the sea. However, the tourist facilities are not shown in this map.

The second map is quite different which has plethora of changes from the previous one. From the beginning, a landing pier is built which connects the sea with the island. Travellars can use it to step on the island from their ships. Forwarding to the island from the jetty, a reception room is placed for checking in and checking out purpose of the tourists. Besides, a several amount of houses are placed for accommodation and refreshment of the travelers. Moreover, a beautiful restaurant is set up for taking foods and drinks. Not only these facilities but also a swimming area is constructed on the bank of the beach.

Over all, from the second map, the island looks an enjoyable place where a bunch of tourist facilities have been provided for the refreshment of the tourists who love travelling.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'several amounts'.
Suggestion: several amounts
...out purpose of the tourists. Besides, a several amount of houses are placed for accommodation ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84924623116 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66668981413 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3329121395 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209837710996 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746085732513 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826001970683 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15990746188 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863155982435 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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