The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
These two maps are a comparison of changes that occurred on an island.
Overall, at the beginning the island was empty. Notwithstanding, the number of tourist facilities has significantly increased over the years. Firstly, it can be clearly seen that the vast majority of the island was empty. It had only a small beach on its western side and a couple of trees scattered around the island. There were no roads and facilities.
However, over the years, much has changed. On both sides of the island, small accommodation villages have emerged. What is more, footpaths were created which connected bungalows with different facilities. Moreover, the swimming area was created near the beach and it was connected to the accommodation on the left side of the island. In the middle reception and restaurant were constructed. On the south side, the pier was created. Possibly it was made for boats that tourist could rent. Furthermore, all these facilities were connected by a vehicle track. Also, important is to mention that all the green areas were not felled. Notwithstanding, the east side of the island was still empty and unused.
- Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 78
- It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do the disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages? 61
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do the disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08556149733 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89366585278 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5531314266 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4375 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6875 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147528433498 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499613735604 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602868839098 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148000525577 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822015149114 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.06 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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