The map below illustrates the changes that occurred in city hospitals' road access in 2007 and in 2010.
Overall, it is evident that over this period drastic changes have occurred in the hospital road and minor changes in city road however the ring road remains the same.
In 2007, the city hospital is surrounded by the ring road and to the south of it heads another road named hospital road which comprises of 6 bus stops that are 3 on each side along with a car parking facility for both public and staff were provided to the east of it furthermore the path of hospital road leads to a junction consisting of the city road.
In 2010, as mentioned earlier the hospital is surrounded by the ring road and a public car parking is constructed to the east side along with a roundabout at the south of the road. However, both ends of the hospital road consist of roundabouts which are linked to the bus station on the left side along with a staff car parking constructed toward the right side of the road moreover the city road now has a roundabout.
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... another road named hospital road which comprises of 6 bus stops that are 3 on each side alo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53645833333 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41428020638 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4383798992 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.2 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390026558075 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27991307477 0.103423049105 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176172020672 0.0843802449381 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317276167659 0.15604864568 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179358436881 0.0819641961636 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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