Weakness of English language among students in Yemen

Essay topics:

Weakness of English language among students in Yemen

English language is deemed to be a fundamental requirement of the modern era.Therefore, Governments must spend much money and place a great bugdet in order to acheive a good education in English language for the students.
Moreover, It is an international language that connects the world and opens horizons in different fields of life.

In Yemen, people are not seriously taking care of English language which due to a miserable level in English language .
Consequently, Many reasons can cause such a major problem, like :
1- Lack of real interest and misconcept of some families.
2- Absence of the role of the ministry of education.

In order to execute this problem, government-in cooperation with the ministry of education-must :

1- Establish intensive courses in English language- in the summer vacation- for the students.
2- Oraganize competitions in best English speaker.
3-Teach English language from early stages -from the first year of the elementary school or even from the KG- and pay attention to renewing the curriculum.

To sum up, I believe that this problem must be taken into consideration from those who have the authority and the power to make a change.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32105263158 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06175970095 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8656307198 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250650436319 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984190663917 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101873725143 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853618356803 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102068848091 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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