Station Manager
Great Western Railway
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in the hope of getting back my lost wallet. I worried for the last few days because I could not find it anywhere since I got off the TR19 train departed at 10:00 pm on 17th, June.
The wallet is a product of H&M with black leather material and my name Jamie customized at the locker. it contained my driving liscense, ID card and 300$ as cash. I have been very unconvenient these days as I can not drive. I think I dropped it somewhere around my seat which is numbered 23 at the second train car.
You can contact me by email at jamieyang@gmail.com or on 25648791 anytime to notify me about my wallet. I will be please to give any necessary confirmation or extra information in the process of finding and getting back lost and found things.
I am very appreciate on your support.
With regards,
Jamie Yang
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
... hope of getting back my lost wallet. I worried for the last few days because I could not f...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...my name Jamie customized at the locker. it contained my driving liscense, ID card ...
^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$300'.
Suggestion: $300
...tained my driving liscense, ID card and 300$ as cash. I have been very unconvenient ...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...$ as cash. I have been very unconvenient these days as I can not drive. I think I...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69002685394 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691358024691 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3134024179 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176753145955 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579188650149 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533480026603 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792783615417 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465275383325 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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