Environmental issues are now becoming one of the hottest discussing topics. There are a variety opinions on climate change reforms appeared on both positive and negative sides. Some think that it could negatively affect businesses but others considered those reforms as an opportunity. This essay is about to discuss both points of views.
On the one hand, because of climate change reforms, government have to create more laws and regulations to protect the environment which appears as a pressure for the economy and business. They are forced to minimize their released toxic into environment by investing a great deal of money on renewing infrastructure, machines and technologies. Resources for environmental friendly ingredients are rare and cost effective as produced with a more complicated process. In addition, there must be an evolution in product line - challenge for research and developing department. As a result, the price is made higher which lead to the recession of profit.
On the other hand, it can be a opportunity for new businesses or start-up companies. Consumers demand on environmental-friendly products increases dramatically as they begin taking of themselves living conditions. Climate change reforms redirect the trend of consuming products. They look for organic ingredients and requesting the less plastic packaging. Business now can be more competitive with rivals by focusing on new market share, friendly to environment products and safe for human. As the pioneer of the industry, customers remind of their product first when they are in demand.
In my perspective, climate change reforms remain the negative factor to lives but it can be an opportunity for business to have a new market share and improving their own reputation.
- When travelling back home on the train last week you lost your wallet The wallet contains some valuable things In your letter write to the Station Manager say when and where you left your wallet describe the wallet and what was in it say how you will coll
- When travelling back home on the train last week you lost your wallet The wallet contains some valuable things In your letter write to the Station Manager say when and where you left your wallet describe the wallet and what was in it say how you will coll 78
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- SOME THINK THAT CLIMATE CHANGE REFORMS WILL NEGATIVELY AFFECT BUSINESS OTHERS FEEL THEY ARE AN OPPORTUNITY FOR BUSINESSES DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION 59
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
... research and developing department. As a results, the price is made higher which lead to...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which lead to the recession of profit. On the other hand, it can be a opportuni...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rofit. On the other hand, it can be a opportunity for new businesses or start...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46545454545 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18597362769 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9217464119 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359347441365 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107187720171 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100942505583 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23138354517 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110026347587 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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