There are many discussions about the income of sport professionals. Many people believe that this is fully justified while other think it is unfair. These contrary points of view may happened due to the different ways of looking at professions.
On the one hand, sport professionals always have to practice for a long time under high pressure. Their exercise are studied and developed seriously by experts. Together with exercise, it is compulsory to strictly follow a healthy diet with vitamins and food supplements. A great deal of money as income is a deserved award for their efforts and dedication. They are responsible for a whole country when it comes to professional competitions. Sport professionals practice for their health and participate in worldwide competitions in the hope of becoming a champion, getting a trophy with the name of their motherland. Moreover, they are also considered as simple for positive lifestyle and motivation of younger generations to start workout and doing exercises.
On the other hand, a number of contrary opinions appeared because the benefits of this career are rarely seen publicly. The television programmes only film and promote the image sport professional on short periods, from competing to winning moments. The public misunderstands that it is not complicated to be paid a great deal of money and reputation. In addition, the society does not focus and exploit dedication of professionals fully as doctors, businessman and teachers.
In conclusion, payment is based on the value that one's major bring to life and every profession should be considered equally. In my perspective, the high income of sport professionals is fully justified because of their nature of work and dedication to the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30107526882 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08854941235 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3212273788 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23860516367 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722367745028 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986377024212 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145435842483 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843239227389 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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