Life is always full of challenges and it happens under a variety of expression. Sometimes, bad situations occur and there are two types of reaction commonly expressed by human. Some people believe that it is the best to accept them and the rest try to improve at all cost.
Unsatisfactory job or shortage of money bring the mood of human down. They feel so tired thinking about it and then choose to accept the reality. This reaction can occur due to experiences in the past, they may try so hard working, solving problems, explaining the situation with thousands of excuses but there was no difference. In addition, advice from other people also plays an important role. It has a huge effect on emotions and behaviors which can force people to accept without considering. We usually have the tendency to find "teammate" who has the same reaction in dealing with the same situation. Once they are not alone, they lie to themselves to accept. The habit of accepting bad situations allow people to skip their mistake easily. There will be no chance for them to figure out the reasons and ways to get over it. As a results, they keep making the same mistake and then pressure their metal health with struggles in their lives.
On the other hand, some people overcome bad situations quickly because they think that it is better to try and improve rather than accepting. This action not only help to perfect their lifestyle by allowing them to consider happened events and make sure that the same mistakes will never be made again but also spread the positive thinking to the society. It appears after a long process of practice dealing with problems. They are known as a person who is always full of motivation to move on and opportunities to be promoted.
In my opinion, we can not accept bad situation as natural disasters happening to our lives since they are able to be predicted and prevented. Whenever a problem occurs, looking for solutions and trying to improve is the only way for us to overcome and get better in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 847, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...the reasons and ways to get over it. As a results, they keep making the same mistake and ...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...because they think that it is better to try and improve rather than accepting. This act...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76966292135 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63139134807 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3065126059 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3684210526 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229004778752 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702475780046 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792828878376 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151308309172 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344346070191 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.