It is believed, playing team sports had more advantage while other believes playing individual sport have most benefits comparatively. In this topic I will discuss about both the views.
Playing sport is a healthy activity for physical and mental health. Sports like football and basketball involves more of team work and team collaboration. These type of sport required absolute team skills and supports. In team sport it is easy to identify one's fault and able to work on it with the support of the teammates. Sports like these creates more opportunities for learning among the group and also provide more morale supports.
On the other hand, playing individual sport such as tennis or swimming has the upper hand to shine alone. since it's a individual sport it doesn't required any sort of team play. So the individual can concentrate on its own goal and set his/ her parameters. In order to achieve success they have to work hard untill they can reach the level of excellence. They develop self motivation and winning attitude.
In conclusion, playing sport is always a benifical activity either it is played in team or individually. While playing individual sport have key skills set for success, but personally I believe playing team sports have more advantage than it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s. In team sport it is easy to identify ones fault and able to work on it with the s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ming has the upper hand to shine alone. since its a individual sport it doesnt requir...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ming has the upper hand to shine alone. since its a individual sport it doesnt requir...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...as the upper hand to shine alone. since its a individual sport it doesnt required a...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he upper hand to shine alone. since its a individual sport it doesnt required any...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... alone. since its a individual sport it doesnt required any sort of team play. So the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68468753672 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1789234068 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5714285714 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25188210981 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961456600597 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725692128793 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184273697001 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05769324741 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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