Dear Sir,
I have been recently employed as a part time worker at one of your shop. Its been nearly 6 months and i have no issues what so ever. But now i have an issue that need to be addressed immediately for the betterment of the shop.
As a full time student, the part time job provides sufficient wages to survive and also reduces my spending on the food. One of the reason I joined the job is because I enjoy cooking and servicing. I also feel the environment of the shop is very good and the others workers are very friendly. I thoroughly enjoy my role over here until a few weeks back.
I have noticed that some of the full time employees slaking in their role. They take break often and avoid working at the kitchen. This is burdening the other employees. They are not helping in cleaning nor cutting the vegetables. They just use the phone most of the time.
I hope this issue can be addressed as soon as possible.
yours faithfully,
Steve smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
..., I have been recently employed as a part time worker at one of your shop. Its been ne...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue that need to be addressed immediately for the betterment of the shop. As a...
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Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...or the betterment of the shop. As a full time student, the part time job provides suf...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e shop. As a full time student, the part time job provides sufficient wages to surviv...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...ood. One of the reason I joined the job is because I enjoy cooking and servicing. I also f...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... role over here until a few weeks back. I have noticed that some of the full tim...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... over here until a few weeks back. I have noticed that some of the full time...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ew weeks back. I have noticed that some of the full time employees slaking in their ro...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...k. I have noticed that some of the full time employees slaking in their role. They t...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'break'.
Suggestion: often break
...loyees slaking in their role. They take break often and avoid working at the kitchen. This ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...an be addressed as soon as possible. yours faithfully, Steve smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44134078212 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38957297167 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63687150838 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.771553056 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.7857142857 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7857142857 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 5.23603664747 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117756503278 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352123421495 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359721431589 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542217415561 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412790424419 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.