Dear Sir,
I am your employee based in the Vasai branch of Bassein Catholic Bank. I am writing this letter in regards to the two week leave required by me. I am appearing for JAIIB exams which are starting next week. Hence, I need a leave from the 1st of June to the 12th of June.
I am aware that a few more employees are on leave too and I being not around will create a difficulty. But, I can assure you that I shall clear up all the pending work as soon as i resume work.
This exam shall set a milestone in my career and I am very confident about clearing it. It shall be helpful for the future prospects of the bank too. It will upgrade my knowledge to a higher level and boost up my productivity. Therefore, its my ardent request to grant me the leave, which will help me focus on my studies and give my best shot at the exams.
Thanking you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Eleanor Roosevalt
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Catholic Bank. I am writing this letter in regards to the two week leave required by me. I am...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s to the two week leave required by me. I am appearing for JAIIB exams which are ...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...to the two week leave required by me. I am appearing for JAIIB exams which are starting next...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...few more employees are on leave too and I being not around will create a difficul...
^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lear up all the pending work as soon as i resume work. This exam shall set a m...
^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd boost up my productivity. Therefore, its my ardent request to grant me the leave...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25287356322 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34056971992 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2895991583 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6666666667 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12925897328 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503270789335 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455737059099 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922040331443 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430504350781 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.2329268293 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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