Dear Jake,
Hope everything’s good at your end. To help you recollect, we met on the return journey on 10th of this month from Paris to Toronto. It was my immense pleasure to have your company and I am writing this letter to talk about something we discussed on the journey.
You and I had a long talk about our careers, wherein you mentioned about a few vacancies in your upcoming new restaurant at St. Lauren's Street. St. Lauren's Street is famous for its cultural and art heritage, and a restaurant in that area is truly a wise decision. Hence, I would like to apply for the position of a Pastry Chef, as my credentials will help boost up the business altogether. I have had an experience of 4 years wherein I have worked as the Pasty Head and Head of Chefs too.
Being curious as well as creative has made me passionate about my career. Among the many desserts I have mastered Crème Brulee is my signature dish, along with Pannacotta, Tiramisu, Crème caramel and fondant cakes. I have earned my degree from The Baking School Of Culinary Art, Paris and have worked with many French patisseries in Paris during my elementary years. Later I joined Le 15 The Ultimate Cake & Pastry Hub in Toronto, where I am presently working with.
Meeting you was ultimate destiny, as I was already planning to apply for the job in your restaurant. I am confident that working with your company will surely help me expand my horizons and think out of the box. I hope my qualifications intertwined with experience will meet up your requirements, as I am looking forward for this opportunity. You can contact me on +91 9009234567.
Thanking You.
Regards,
Eleanor Roosevalt
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perience will meet up your requirements, as I am looking forward for this opportu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 293.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75085324232 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76382259743 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58361774744 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9924459241 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159048104619 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602367028209 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675191964328 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101680436917 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581041536463 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.