Due to the increase in population, the need for housing and infrastructure is on the go. According to stats, China being the most populated country faces the issue of providing housing for its people. India being second on the list has no fewer problems.
Due to urbanization in the 19th century, the cities and towns flourished, as a result of globalization. Despite the availability of basic resources, people from the villages and remote places are attracted towards the shine and glamour of the city life. This has led to the crowding of cities and the growing need for resources, housing being one of it. Tall buildings and skyscrapers are built so as to fit in spaces available. Playgrounds and parks are replaced with row houses. Cattles are left with fewer grazing pastures to feed upon.
It is quite important to protect our native lands as they are the only places left with some nature. The countryside being once abandoned was left intact as a result of its remoteness. Owing to this, it has become calm, peaceful and serene. The landscaping views are breathtaking as well as refreshing. To escape the busy city life, people like to visit these gateways close to nature and relax in its wholesomeness. Many Ayurveda treatments are held up in such places, so as to relieve stress and rejuvenate the mind and body. People now, are also abandoning cities and moving towards the suburbs as it is quite cheap to construct a home and enjoy the bliss of nature.
It’s in our hands now to protect the eco zones and ecosystems. We should not tamper with Mother Nature as she is the reason for our existence. I espouse the notion, that the beauty of countryside should not be hampered. The future generations should be grateful to us, for saving them some Mother Earth.
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion? 61
- The only reason people work hard is to earn more money There are no other reasons to do it To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how 78
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a business man who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter 73
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...all buildings and skyscrapers are built so as to fit in spaces available. Playgrounds an...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... treatments are held up in such places, so as to relieve stress and rejuvenate the mind ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, well, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82410423453 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70054772509 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57003257329 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2765467022 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.05 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146821952461 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355615784704 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339571315514 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754512319994 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311463880832 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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