You received an email from your English friend, Susan. She asked you some information about one of your friends. Read part of her email below.
I’ve just got an email from your friend, Mai. She says she is going to do a course in London this Summer. She asks if she could stay with my family until she can find an apartment. Can you tell me a bit about her (things like her personality, hobbies and interests, and her current work or study if possible)? I want to see if she will fit in with my family.
Dear Susan, Thank you for your letter. It is great to hear your news.
I am sorry not write to you earlier because I have been busy recently. I am writing this email to tell about Mai, who is going to learn the English course in London this Summer. I would say she is a kind, hard-working and considerate. I would like to mention that she often helps all people living near her house. Moreover, in her school, she is one of the best students as well as she also a leader for activities social. Regard to hear hobbies, she is a big fan of shopping. I know you too. Therefore, I conceive you and she has become close friend. In addition, she alse like sport such as tennis, swimming. Nowadays, she is senior student at local university that work in restaurant in center city. I believe that my parent will love her when she resides in with your family.
That some information I know about Mai. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Please let me know if you need have more information.
All the best,
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-31 | huynhphuochai | 86 | view |
| 2019-07-31 | huynhphuochai | 66 | view |
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- Test 1 11
- You received an email from your English friend Susan She asked you some information about one of your friends Read part of her email below I ve just got an email from your friend Mai She says she is going to do a course in London this Summer She asks if s 86
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ur letter. It is great to hear your news . I am sorry not write to you earlier b...
^^
Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g to do a course in London this Summer. I would say she is a kind, hard-working a...
^
Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...ng and considerate. You know, she often help all people living near her house. Moreo...
^^^^
Line 2, column 501, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... too. Therefore, I conceive you and she have become close friend. In addition, she a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30508474576 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3949985761 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 1.53170731707 979% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5241170513 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 44.8235294118 112.824112599 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.4117647059 22.9334400587 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431048003323 0.215688989381 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116191894044 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589701711308 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197102920776 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128561703418 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 13.2329268293 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.3012195122 36% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.24 11.4140731707 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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