Traffic jams are becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Effort has been made to cope with it, for example, the construction of new bridges, the situation seems not to change much
In recent years, traffic congestion has become a broad issue to the general public on worldwide. Although noticeable, the impact of this issue has not been realized by many residents. Discussed below are serveral reasons as well as propose some possitive solution to resolve it.
First and foremost, people should recognized that there are many reasons lead to this problem. A very important point to consider is that a number of vehicles is on the increasing because many people buy car with affordable prize in recent years. Another point I would like to make is that the traffic infrastructures are out-of-date. This mean that the government is not enough the money for reparing road every year. To illustrate this point, I would like to mention that many road is very bad and poor in the rural areas. Moreover, people are not comply the traffic law therefore they lead many problems for others during drive on road.
In order to resolve this issue, people should take some concerted measures. One primary solution would be that the govement should tax heavily personal car and using the money to improve traffic infrastructures. In addition, in the urban cities, the government and bussiness should invert money more to develop public transport. This mean would be that people can use more public transport for working daily. Last but not least, education is the main way to address this issue. People need to be aware the impacts of this problem so that they can avoid them.
To sum up, the above-mentioned facts have outlined the causes of overload traffic as well as sugesst some positive measures to tackle this issue. The presented suggestions would be very good steps towads of this problem. People should have further consideration in this issue.
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- Test 1 11
- Traffic jams are becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Effort has been made to cope with it, for example, the construction of new bridges, the situation seems not to change much 67
- Your colleague has invited you to his farewell party. You will not be able to attend the party, write a letter to the friend-explain the situation-say why you will not be attendin- say something about the period you have worked together and his/her work 56
- Recently the role of men and women in the family has changed Men tend to spend more time taking care of their family Women go to work and pursue their careers Is this a positive or negative development Give your opinion 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...gestion has become a broad issue to the general public on worldwide. Although noticeable, the ...
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Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun road seems to be countable; consider using: 'many roads'.
Suggestion: many roads
...his point, I would like to mention that many road is very bad and poor in the rural areas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98979591837 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60214752349 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544217687075 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8634233362 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123811992303 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424873517066 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341269172188 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775170337608 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402969012768 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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