Recently, the role of men and women in the family has changed. Men tend to spend more time taking care of their family. Women go to work and pursue their careers. Is this a positive or negative development? Give your opinion.
In recent years, the changes about role of men and women in the family have become a major issue to the general public. The men give more time for their family and the women can pursue their jobs. many residents conceive that this issue has many benefits. However, other believe that it could also some negative. In my view, I completely agree with former idea. Discussed below are several reasons supporting my perspective.
First and foremost, people should recognize that this development has many advantages. A very important point I would like to mention is that the men can tend to contribute more time taking cake of their children and family. this mean that the children would feel happy when receive love from both farther and mother. In addition, another point is that the family members have become closer because the men and women often take care their kids. therefore, it is maked to improve happy of family. Furthermore, in addition of a benefit of the changes of men in family, I would like to mention is that the changes of women in nowadays. In fact, the contribution of women in jobs is that make to increase money for their family, therefore they could become successful in business as well as social. Besides in some special careers, they are only perfect for women. To illustrate this point, I would like to mention is that the women would have advantages in the teachers of in garden school jobs. Last but not least, this development contributes for the balance between men and women.
To sum up, the above-mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people evaluate the impact of this problem, and it is still a controversial of this issue. people should take advantages of this trend. As far as, I am concerned I put more highlight for positive development. people should have further consideration on this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...family have become a major issue to the general public. The men give more time for their famil...
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Suggestion: Many
...ly and the women can pursue their jobs. many residents conceive that this issue has ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...king cake of their children and family. this mean that the children would feel happy...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...n and women often take care their kids. therefore, it is maked to improve happy of family...
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...to mention is that the changes of women in nowadays. In fact, the contribution of women in ...
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Suggestion: People
...is still a controversial of this issue. people should take advantages of this trend. A...
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Suggestion: People
...ore highlight for positive development. people should have further consideration on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in fact, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83544303797 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58072676138 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509493670886 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.576056206 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366839961813 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103433277179 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106975419562 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22445078009 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101369840628 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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