You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The first bar graph demonstrate the proportion of males and females in a nation who do various houseworks and the second bar chart illustrates the average times each gender preferred on each home task per day.
In general, it is clear that in the first bar graph, cooking is the most important housework for men and women to choose. Additionally, most of females spend more times than males in doing home tasks in the second bar chart.
Looking at the first bar chart for more details, one can see that cooking is the most popular choice of men and women, with 60% and over 80% respectively. The percentage of cleaning between each gender is at the second highest position, starting with approximately 40% of males and more than 60% of females. In contrast, the least choice of housework belongs to house repair with under 10% of women and almost 20% of men, followed by pet care with around 20% in both sexes.
As can be seen from the second bar graph, the most time expenditure of males and females is cooking with around a hour for men and almost 90 minutes for women. The amount of time spending for cleaning of women is higher than men, with over 60 minutes compares with around 40 minutes respectively. The least total of time between males and females belongs to house repairs, starting with under 10 minutes for females and almost 20 minutes for males. Pet care is witness to have the same amount of times for both gender, with 20 minutes each
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the females') or simply say ''most females''.
Suggestion: most of the females; most females
... men and women to choose. Additionally, most of females spend more times than males in doing ho...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ales and females is cooking with around a hour for men and almost 90 minutes for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61923076923 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35960519714 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2131960538 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.1 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261166061553 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127839279927 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408738753352 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176095841658 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276500533146 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.