Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?
It is a common belief that in numerous nations, there are not enough learners enroll in science subjects in universities. From my perspective, I agree that this phenomenon will lead to negative consequences since students do not have enough science facilities to practice experiments and the salary range for science jobs is too low in the market.
The first and foremost reason for this trend is the lack of scientific facilities to observe experiments. Since the budget that the authorities spend on lab facilities are low significantly. Therefore, the majority of students are only learning about science lessons by theoretical knowledge instead of visual experiments. Secondly, the minimum wage for scientists in the job market is not affordable for them to live in an expensive society. As a consequence, they can not risk the bare minimum living standard for a job that will not secure the life of their whole family. For example, the salaries of doctors in Vietnam are too low for them to pay their mortgage rent, hence, they have to do extra jobs in other private clinics and do not have time to take care of not only themselves but also their families.
Students ignoring to study science subjects in universities definitely leads to negative effects on society. Firstly, a nation can not secure the safe of its citizens if they do not have any scientific team to research and develop science weapons to fight. For instance, the world has suffered in two pandemics of COVID-19, unless each nation has scientists to launch vaccinations, the number of deaths in the community will increase dramatically. In addition, the scientific class plays a crucial role in the revenue and reputation of a country because of their contributions to the kit test, for example, selling worldwide to prevent the expansion of diseases and stimulating valuable international cooperation. Therefore, the missing of scientists will create a vulnerable situation for a social life inevitably.
To sum up, I believe that the lack of students choosing to learn scientific subjects because of both the lack of facilities and the low salary range will lead to a negative ending in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ific facilities to observe experiments. Since the budget that the authorities spend o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10924369748 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95861178704 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515406162465 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1380919481 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202195147046 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730034066199 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565238849945 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12668077178 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405114887502 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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