You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps illustrate how village of Ryemouth changed over a 15-year period between 1995 and 2010.
Looking at the map, the village experience a striking transformations. The most noticeable change is that the relocation and expansion in the North Eastern area. Due to the rising population and urbanization, the village have become more modern as we can see there are more facilities like restaurant, apartment and other sport facilities.
On the first map, the village was way greener. In the West Southern area, there was an extended shop and fish market, there also a fishing port right behind the fish market in 1995. The hotel and cafe can be reached right next to the shopping areas. In the North Eastern corner, there was a big farmland and forest park. On the opposite site, the housing area were built for people.
On the second map, the village become more modernize and urbanize. The shopping areas will be replaced by restaurant and apartment to handle the population after 15 years. In the past, a car park, which wasn’t appear next to the hotel, will be constructed. Farmland and forest park was knocked down to make way for golf and tennis courses in 2010. Housing area also expand in the North Western corner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52966078229 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.408113398 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904040684951 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354006779536 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489805241228 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071129375285 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460903799745 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.