You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words.
The three pie charts provide information about compositions of nutrients in usual meals which are expressed in average percentages. Overall, all, except breakfast, contain a lot of sodium, saturated fats and sugar.
First of all, as for sodium, breakfast and lunch have the minimal percentage of this element in contrast to dinner or lunch which contain 43% and 29% respectively. According to the pie chart with saturated fats, breakfast holds the least value of fats and also it ranks the same position in the composition of added sugar. Breakfast obtain in the both above mentioned pie charts 16%. It is worth to notice that dinner and snacks are the most dangerous meals for people's health since they have huge quantity of sodium, fats and sugar. The most healthiest meals for individuals are breakfast and lunch. Snacks cannot be marked as useful dishes due to the fact that they contain a lot of added sugar totaling in 42%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'healthiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: healthiest
...quantity of sodium, fats and sugar. The most healthiest meals for individuals are breakfast and...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the healthiest'.
Suggestion: most the healthiest
...quantity of sodium, fats and sugar. The most healthiest meals for individuals are breakfast and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, as for, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95541401274 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5612541301 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8729903018 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117465693026 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557384697701 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580331104334 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120305306005 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475057137426 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.