1. You recently bought an electronic device for your home. Your friend wants to buy the same device and has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
• describe the device
• please explain why you bought it
• say whether or not your friend should buy it and why.
Dear Sam,
I trust this letter finds you with best of health. I wanted to share my recent purchase experience of Google Home. I bought the product from a mega black Friday sale and i must say its worth every penny. The google home is a virtual assistant providing a seamless functionality, operated with voice command. The advanced features of this product includes integration with other smart devices at home making it more valuable.
You are well-aware of my busy schedule at home and at work, and this device is a piece of smart assistance that helps me doing a lot of activities with simple voice commands. for instance, turning-off lights, locking the doors and turning on or off the smart devices connected with it. Its cutting-edge functionality compelled me to invest a hefty amount on this purchase. I have been looking for this sort of product that helps me with house chores, hands-free assistance and enhance my efficiency at a significant level.
Considering your preferences and lifestyle, i would highly recommend Google home to you. Its multifunctionality and innovative features simply makes it worth buying. It is certainly going to increase your productivity and make day-to-day routine tasks easy for you.
In conclusion, based on my positive experience, i recommend you to buy this device at your earliest and make good use of it. It is not only an advanced product according to current lifestyle requirements but also adds a layer of convenience in your life.
I wish you all the best in your purchasing decision.
Yours Sincerely.
Aamy
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-01-12 | mehjabin | 82 | view |
| 2024-01-01 | Amna Zeeshan | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I trust this letter finds you with best ...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oduct from a mega black Friday sale and i must say its worth every penny. The goo...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to do' or 'do'.
Suggestion: to do; do
...piece of smart assistance that helps me doing a lot of activities with simple voice c...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... activities with simple voice commands. for instance, turning-off lights, locking t...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nvest a hefty amount on this purchase. I have been looking for this sort of produ...
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Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...idering your preferences and lifestyle, i would highly recommend Google home to y...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...usion, based on my positive experience, i recommend you to buy this device at you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98061786216 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6961536499 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281440780647 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103831561087 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876659978544 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169280182114 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636885365163 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.