3. Some people think mobile (cell) phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the ever-growing mobile phone usage, the idea of prohibiting the use in public places has sparked a heated debate. Many people believe that there should be a complete ban on phone utilization outdoors or in public areas. I firmly disagree with this approach as it is impractical and unrealistic.
To begin with, the mobile phone is now an inevitable gadget and is used for enormous other activities other than attending phone calls only. Posing a complete stop on using the cell phones would create chaos as many people use it for navigation, communication and for emergency purposes. Instead of that, a balanced approach can be opted such as the introduction of polices pertinent to reasonable usage in outdoors.
Furthermore, it is completely understandable that many people use the mobile phone inappropriately. For instance, playing loud music or conversing loudly in public creates inconvenience for surrounding people. However, the government can enforce reasonable usage such as putting the phone on silent mode, using headphones while listening to music or conversing on calls in the designated phone areas only.
In conclusion, i would like to reiterate that complete restrictions on phones would lead to discomfort for many and will cause disruptive behaviors. Rather than implementing such stringent action, a rational approach is to implement well-written phone usage guidelines and ensure people obey the rules to prevent any hurdles in executing their day-to-day phone-related activities.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ed phone areas only. In conclusion, i would like to reiterate that complete r...
^
Line 9, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir day-to-day phone-related activities.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52789699571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13902657128 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6632014777 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.090909091 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233410805025 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993208080613 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632356404729 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159582684577 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102940226313 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ed phone areas only. In conclusion, i would like to reiterate that complete r...
^
Line 9, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir day-to-day phone-related activities.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52789699571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13902657128 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6632014777 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.090909091 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233410805025 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993208080613 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632356404729 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159582684577 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102940226313 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.