2. You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference.
Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include:
• Details about the conference
• Why you want your colleague to give the presentation
• What arrangement you will do for this conference
Dear Rick,
I am writing this letter in reference to the conference that I am arranging for the company at the Lincoln Building on June 5th.
As you know that I was weilded the responsibility for the conference, I want you to present our speech at the meet. Everyone on our team is aware of your public speaking skills, coupled with the fact that you are a regular at the Toastmasters, this would be cup of cake for you. You have a good command on the language. Your speech at the last Annual Company meet was met with a lot of appreciation from the managers as well.
Regarding the presentation, there wont be a podium. Instead you will be provided with a portable headset in order to allow mobility. Apart from this, everything will be as usual i.e. projectors, laser pointers etc.
I would ge grateful if you could be on our team and give the presentation.
Yours Sincerely
Marty Kaan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...e presentation, there wont be a podium. Instead you will be provided with a portable he...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73941914789 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1077851507 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292802872245 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103705027069 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643462604006 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135171465187 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805776046022 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.