6. You found a piece of lost luggage with someone's belongings labeled with their name and address. Write a letter to the owner.
In your letter
• describe the luggage you found;
• explain where you found it;
• suggest how the owner could get it back.
Dear Mr. Sam,
I trust this letter finds you well. I intend to write this letter to inform you that I have come across a suitcase which has your name written on it, Sam Smith, address 123 Ontario, Canada.
I found this suitcase yesterday near KFC Cheetham Hill Street while I was returning home. This is a large size black suitcase with your details. The case seems intact until now and is not broken at all. I cannot guarantee the availability of luggage inside it as it is still locked with secret codes you might have. But I am assuming no one has tried opening it till now. I can safely say it is in safe hands now until it reaches back to its original owner.
I have two suggestions to work out for return. Firstly, i suggest I take it to the nearby police station and you can pick it up by confirming your identity. Or, we can meet at Cheetham Hill KFC at your convenience and i can return it you in person. I am comfortable doing either way.
I am determined to return the suitcase to you as I understand that lost luggage can create chaos.
I look forward to your confirmation on any plan to proceed further.
Yours Sincerely, Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Sam, I trust this letter finds you well. I in...
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Line 6, column 57, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...stions to work out for return. Firstly, i suggest I take it to the nearby police ...
^
Line 6, column 219, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eetham Hill KFC at your convenience and i can return it you in person. I am comfo...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d that lost luggage can create chaos. I look forward to your confirmation on an...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3738317757 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43692372827 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640186915888 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5528770086 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261896015671 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720021374359 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559534970433 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114254181746 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634614766716 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.