Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas . Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
In the edge of industrial revolution, the number of businessman and company is steady increasing. That leads to the lack of office for rent or further is the problem in accommodation and transport due to crowded cities. In this situation, businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. I totally agree with it and here are some reasons. Firstly, when moved to rural areas, businesses will have more chance to find an ideal place for their office. Environment is a key that affect company’s atmosphere. Good air quality, large space and a breathtaking scenery will make their employees work more productive and improve the company’s production. Secondly, the business can save a lot of money for renting which is much expensive if they are placed in urban. Furthermore, the locality in rural areas have lots of moderate policies to appeal company especially big company to have long-term investment in their native. Beside this, there also have some disadvantages when business moved out the city such as the short of public service, the longer distance when they come to meet their partner. But in my opinion, in The Fourth Industrial Revolution the distance will no longer be the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08585858586 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90407553778 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3720369949 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180153545851 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644129959701 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684124885602 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180153545851 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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