Q:- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
life is not only a pink color, on each people’s live, they will meet every aspect of live include both bad and good situation. some people try to get used to with it, other try to improve such situations. In my view, i think that it would be best to face with the situation, ameliorate it and lead your live.
On the one hand, in some situations, people still accept unsatisfied job, unrewarded salary to exchange the stability and a permanent job. it will help them to have a constant money even not much each month to pay for their basic life such as electricity, water bill, maintenance service fee or their children’s school fee. Furthermore, sometime people will admit the unwanted reality wait for the opportunities to change and provide a better live in the future.
On the other side, many find out that the best way to tackle a bad circumstance is to cope with it and find a possible solution to improve the situation. people who went through severe situations will gather a lot of life experience which will really helpful for their job and life. Although sometime it will take an enormous effort to put up with and get through it to reach their goal and ambition, people will receive rewarded salary and experience. take Ford Motor company as an example, in 2008, they nearly go bankrupt because of heavy system and financial crisis worldwide. But they make a decision to renew all their system and modernize the production line. Finally they succeeded and in 2019 they become one of the biggest automobile company on earth.
By and large, it’s the best way to admit reality and deal with it even how bad it is. Don't let fears, especially fears of what others think of you, stand in your way. you must be willing to do things in the unique ways you think are best, and to reflect on any feedback you receive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, really, so, still, i think, such as, by and large, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62691131498 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53797942869 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3292780962 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238814175157 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07775604254 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779146003459 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145343258811 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833425063052 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.