It’s is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
There have some argument about the existence and need of parks and squares in towns and cities. While some people believe that these open premises are essential, others insist that these places make the land useless and soon they will be replaced by some condominiums or parking lots. In my opinion, despite the voices against the larger public places, parks and squares have an important effect to both the towns and its civilians.
First of all, the open areas is always considered as the heart of each cities. Parks help to improve air quality which is getting more and more polluted in cities. It’s also the place to absorb rain-water, reduce floods occur when the rainy season come. Furthermore, parks is where people can relax, provide people’s health. At night, it can become romantic place for couple to have a date and do something that only god knows. Beside the parks, squares also have an important impact on cities. It’s where people can hold public events such as music festival or flower festival. On the other hand, squares which have a history behind their build may become tourist attraction places, which is imperative for people to preserve it for the next generations.
However, it’s obviously that not all cities are able to have more public spaces because of crowded population and lack of land resources. As we see in Hanoi, government need a lot of space to build railways and underground station which made people have to wait for 10 years to build. Therefore, destroying parks and other public places for current benefits is not the solution for for future. “We will never exchange the economy development for the environment”, said by Prime Minister Nguyen Xuan Phuc.
In conclusion, it is necessary for towns to have large public spaces but it also depends on each circumstances, whether or not the towns can afford them.
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... it also depends on each circumstances, whether or not the towns can afford them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00636942675 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56748740241 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5049226133 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286854754722 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939706176773 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625718478511 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179466747109 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418245316376 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.