You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words.
The charts give data on the percentage of nutrients which is not good for people’s health if they eat too much such as sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in a typical meals in the US
In general, american people tend to used lots of three types of nutrients in their dinner. Particularly, sodium is used most in the dinner with 43% while added sugar take up to 42% in snacks.
First of all, it can be seen that the quantity of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar used in breakfast is nearly the same with 14% sodium, 16% saturated fat and 16% added sugar.
In other side, snacks is added an amount of added sugar with 42%. Meanwhile, the percentage of sodium in it is similar with that in breakfast with 14 percent, lower than that in lunch (29%).
Furthermore, people in the us consume about 26% saturated fat, 29% of sodium and only 19% added sugar in lunch.
To sum up, americans tend to use sodium, saturated fat and added sugar much in dinner, snacks and lunch. sodium hold the largest percentage in dinner with 43% used while the rate of added sugar in snacks is ranked the first place with 42%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'meal'?
Suggestion: meal
...urated fat and added sugar in a typical meals in the US In general, american people ...
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Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sodium
...sugar much in dinner, snacks and lunch. sodium hold the largest percentage in dinner w...
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Line 6, column 112, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
...uch in dinner, snacks and lunch. sodium hold the largest percentage in dinner with 4...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while, in general, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47549019608 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30683482896 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6752542875 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0662229663098 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332717687746 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043546222988 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456595100398 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442585996374 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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