Dear Mr Jones,
My name is Howard and perhaps you remember me well, if I remind you, that I am the person who you save last month.
I am a Tax consultant in a local accountancy firm and on that fateful day, 10th March morning exactly, I was rushing to the office as I was already late . Albeit of my careful driving, from nowhere the truck came and turtled my bike resulting in severe injuries. After that I was knocked down unconscious and vaguely remember what happened later. Obviously, the reason I am writing this letter is to express my gratitude for all the help you did when I needed most.
I can't Thank you enough for all the altruistic service you did. I know, sending just a mail is not a good way of showing my appreciation. Infact, even doctors applauded your quick and spontaneous actions of giving me first-aid and calling ambulance to admit me in the nearest hospital. Further, even my family members agreed, that if not your immediate actions we might have been discussing an entire different scenario.It's sign of pure heart to go out of their way to save others and Thanks once again for compassionate heart.
As a token of respect, please accept our invitation for dinner at my house. My friends and parents are eager to meet you and they want personally congratulate for your heroic approach. You can drop at any time to my home, next week, and let this brief moment can be stepping stone to know each other better. Kindly, give us a chance to host you as our guest and show our warm hearted welcome.
Hope you accept our invitation and look forward for your response.
Yours sincerely,
Howard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Jones, My name is Howard and perhaps you remember me well, if I r...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hing to the office as I was already late . Albeit of my careful driving, from nowh...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... help you did when I needed most. I cant Thank you enough for all the altruistic...
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Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
...discussing an entire different scenario.Its sign of pure heart to go out of their w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of their way to save others and Thanks once again for compassionate heart. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... drop at any time to my home, next week, and let this brief moment can be steppin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, well, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64827586207 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5366737686 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662068965517 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.254260955 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307834987977 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10031059206 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806374737945 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170190494963 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292020488717 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.