Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards of admission in computer sciences course, I am Mark Thomas, wants to enroll myself in computer classes.
The reason of writing you a letter is that I do not have basic knowledge related to this course and I need trainer help from basic level, I am not sure about other students but for me it's completely different one.
learning IT is a part of my job requirement, now, I am working in a firm where department demand is; to be educate myself with technology, and I graduated in commerce even-though I never attended information-technology as a subject.
some of basic lectures provided by mentor would be a great help from instructor. I am very hardworking and will give my best to perform exceptionally, your coöperation and teacher's attention develops my skills in this field of study. I believe that you will consider my application in a positive way and co-operate with me.
I am looking forward to your positive response. Your coöperation in consideration will be highly appreciated.
your faithfully,
Mark-Thomas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter in regards of a...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ir / Madam, I am writing this letter in regards of admission in computer sciences course, ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Learning
... me its completely different one. learning IT is a part of my job requirement, no...
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Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pletely different one. learning IT is a part of my job requirement, now, I ...
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Line 11, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raduated in commerce even-though I never attended information-technology as a sub...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed information-technology as a subject. some of basic lectures provided by mento...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...tion-technology as a subject. some of basic lectures provided by mentor wo...
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Line 17, column 283, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e that you will consider my application in a positive way and co-operate with me. I am l...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve way and co-operate with me. I am looking forward to your positive res...
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Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...ation will be highly appreciated. your faithfully, Mark-Thomas
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Line 27, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghly appreciated. your faithfully, Mark-Thomas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1546961326 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30944424415 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3789024039 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114609244786 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389894404199 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630279790295 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062306169081 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710447374522 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.