Air transport increasingly using for exporting fruits and vegetables in countries where they can not grow outweigh the advantage and disadvantages

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Air transport increasingly using for exporting fruits and vegetables in countries where they can not grow outweigh the advantage and disadvantages

Non-agricultural countires are importing fruits and vegetables from agricultural countires via cargo plane and fulfilling the demand nations who have scare of these natural resources. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages will be discusse and evaluate it before reaching to a concrete decision.

Its undeniable fact that air-transport is the fastest mode of transport which, definately provide food product on time such as, vegetable and fruits, they are perishables products and have low shelves-life, which needs to be deliver at on time to the markets, from where, it can be purchased and consumed by consumer at on time without getting waste. Its benefit is; people are eating healthy food on easy access, at the same times variety of fruits and vegetables regardless of seasos they can avail by this way.

For example, United Arab Emirates and United Kingdom are unfertile-countries where croping and cultivation in bulk cannot be possible, so the countries like India, Pakistan and other european countries providing these food-items to them with ease.

on the other hand, its very costly for the exporting-countries, because they have to pay taxes abd subsidies on it and the customer who buy it, has to pay ten times double amount as compare to its real price because in their country its not easily accessible, but its comes under the basic needs of human and makes their body healthy so they have to compromise on money for feeding themselves and their family member a healthy food.

A good illustration of it iS Gulf countries, these are deserted countries where croping is impossible and the resources of fertile land is equivalent to zero, in such cases, compromise with money is the only option for them.

In conclusion, fruits-and-vegetables comes under the basic necessity of human and its a government responsibility to arrange for nation for good cause. In my opinion, its advantages carries more positive aspects as compare to disadvantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26100628931 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16528609054 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.945488495 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.888888889 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247825936142 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930484311997 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312628425389 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110771552139 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280255723482 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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