Why some people believe that doctors and teacher earn less than a sport and entertainment people, they should earn more.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The world is filled with achievers, number of celebrities and athletes makes proud moments to their nations, not only these well-known people but millions of professional who perform remarkable task in their routine also deserve these applause. However there is a big difference in their earning pattern, in this essay, the changes in earning pattern will discuss with supportive evidences in following paragraphs.
In general, well-recognise people earn respect and money together and its in bulk not in pieces, where as, noble profession people such as doctors, teachers, engineers, lawyers deal every day real life challenges somehow they save human lives by, providing timely treatments, saving them from death penalties, creating shelters for nation and educating them for better future. The common people, who performs these outstanding task on daily basis, deserve more but they are unrecognised faces and less-popular in society or country and full time employees where they are not permitted to raise their voices for increments and their wages quota selected by government authorities.
For example, a doctor treat a patient from deadly disease and provide one more opportunity to survive in a world earn less than a movie star give one entertainment movie to country and earn 10times more than a life-saver.
In addition, the coach, who trained athletes earn less as compare to the star sportsman who learn from that person because that athlete is a face of team not the trainer. Another fact behind it, that people who do daily 9-5 job they earn on monthly basis but this is not even 10 percent enough what a sport-person or a film- star earning from their single project.
In conclusion, I believe that if governments cannot increase the salaries of a common person so it should decrease the level of earning of celebrities by which somehow balance living standard starts and all kinds of people treated equally under the same roof.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this applause' or 'these applauses'?
Suggestion: this applause; these applauses
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...together and its in bulk not in pieces, where as, noble profession people such as doctor...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21202531646 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69276092225 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629746835443 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3357935055 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.875 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257623430942 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107802363993 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624828865654 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13574987428 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523240979768 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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