The chart below shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information about population rates in Japan divided to three age groups (0-14, 15-64 and 65+) from 1960 to 2040.
Overall, the proportions of those who are 15-64 tears old were significantly higher than those of the other two age groups and are expected to keep this trend in the future. Moreover, the figure for 0-14 category shows that this population rates are about to decline while the elderly proportion is predicted to increase.
The figures for 0-14 age group and 15-64 experienced quiet similar trends. The former initially stood on 65% while the latter accounted for less than a half (only 30%) in 1960. Both figures decreased steadily in the next 10 years by around 5% each. From 1970 there was a gradual decrease among 0-14 population. They were only 15% of total population by 2010, and this rate is expected to fall below 10% by 2040. The graph for 15-64 also decreased with some fluctuations and is likely to hit a low point at around 52% in 2030.
On the other hand, the figure for those who aged 65 and over was the lowest in 1960 and accounted for only 5%. Then it experienced a gradual growth and reached to around 25% bu 2010. According to future projections, this upward trend will continue and peak at around 35% by 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...0. Overall, the proportions of those who are 15-64 tears old were significantly high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64732142857 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39608241459 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9360254606 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125572498361 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487289369568 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567802540305 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995599017629 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064202867072 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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