The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
The two charts illustrate the possession of electrical components in washing machines, refrigerator, vacuum cleaner, and time-consuming housekeeping in a region during 1920 - 2019.
Overall, there had been an upward trend in the proportion of electrical appliances, whereas, amount of times in doing chores had a significant downward over 99 years, from 1920 - 2019.
It is clear that electrical appliances are over 50 per cent from 1920 to 1940, and continuing to considerable rise to 90 per cent of the refrigerator, in which, washing machine and vacuum cleaner mixed up to 70 per cent. However, the washing machine saw a slightly downward about 65 per cent in 1980, while the refrigerator reached the peak of 100 per cent, similar to a vacuum cleaner at 90 per cent in 1980. The following 39 years saw a rapid climb to refrigerator and vacuum cleaner, followed by stability remain at 100 per cent of both, in which, a washing machine was a steadily rise by 10 per cent from 1980 to 2019.
In contrast to the time-consuming housework, there was a dramatic decline by 30 hours per week over the period of 20 years from 1920 to 1940. After that, a gradual fall to 15 hours in 2000 hit the lowest point at 10 hours in 2019.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('steadily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
...f both, in which, a washing machine was a steadily rise by 10 per cent from 1980 to 2019. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71962616822 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88455277622 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528037383178 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0432236283 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.285714286 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130647039536 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763002746757 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623277010355 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111690604565 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562854010471 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 8.37731958763 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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