Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I’m interested to apply for chef position at your newly launched restaurant. We met on place from India to Canada on December 16 2018. I was sitting next to you and were discussing about your restaurants around the city. I was deeply impressed by the knowledge shared by you.
I have completed my graduation in Hotel Management and have an experience of 6 years of cooking in Chinese Cuisine. I would love to become a chef cook for Sichuan food. I began cooking when I was 13 years old and found my passion towards cooking. I’m the right person for your restaurant as it is Chinese cuisine and I’m an expert cook in same field. I’m a young and energetic person who speaks fluent English which helps a lot for living in Canada. My resume is attached and please have a look if you are interested.
I hope you have a great success for your new restaurant as you have a great vision of Chinese restaurant in Canada.
Thank you for taking time for reading my letter. I’m looking forward to hearing soon from you.
Yours Faithfully
Shiny Jaya Ratna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ressed by the knowledge shared by you. I have completed my graduation in Hotel M...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e an experience of 6 years of cooking in Chinese Cuisine. I would love to become ...
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...6 years of cooking in Chinese Cuisine. I would love to become a chef cook for Si...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to become a chef cook for Sichuan food. I began cooking when I was 13 years old a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64356435644 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50708240981 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628712871287 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8607461127 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158574176112 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611286231333 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537527817953 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119177388401 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524840625829 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.