Money has played a vital role in each and every aspect since the beginning of ages. Even in the olden times, barter system was a form of system to exchange goods and services. Money began from gold coins, later to bronze and now in form of currency. Some people are of the opinion,in order to earn this money people tend to do hard work. There cant be any other reasons to this which, certainly isnt true.
Primarily, in today's era, hard work is the key to success. Be it any kind of field, until you don't sweat, you wont reap fruits. The compensation paid for this is monetary gains. This money wont help in buying either happiness or satisfaction. People run to work with certain objectives in mind. People have their agendas set out, as of how to utilise the money.
Secondly, money is a source of income for survival. People work hard not only for money, but also to fulfill the needs and desires of their family members. The smile on the face of a child when he receives a gift from his mother is priceless. She forgets all the turmoil she's been through and immerses herself in the moment.
Moreover, it is wisely said, no man is more lucky than to have his hobby as his career. These people are passionate and determined towards the work they do. Here the goal is to achieve greater success and gains are high level of content and comfort.
However, there are some individuals who work hard solely for money. They opine that money can buy anything and everything. With the growing inflation and increased cost of living, money has a huge role to play. Survival is next to impossible without this piece of paper. Such people sure do succeed in life, but tend to lose family attachments. They have huge houses but no place to call home.
Finally, I am strongly of the opinion that money can not always be the only source of factor for hard work. Family, happiness, satisfaction and passion equally play important roles in the process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59885386819 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29403584786 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595988538682 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.5089181565 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7307692308 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4230769231 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29752415101 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672780841492 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683152058987 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137491689117 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382267152695 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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