During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a
chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should
contact him about a possible Job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
• remind him when and where you met
• tell him what kind of Job you are interested in
• say why you think you would be suitable for the Job
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to remind you about a potential job in one of your restaurant, Tayto, which you have discussed with me while we both were travelling last week.
I would like to start with my introduction. I am Rehan Yousaf, and I shared a flight with you while we both were commuting from Islamabad to Karachi last weekend, October 15, 2019. We have had shared our interests and our educational backgrounds. Upon this, you have instructed me to send you a detailed letter giving an overview of my educational background and experiences. I hold a certificate in accountancy, and I am hunting for a job in a relevant field in the hotel industry.
I believe I can be a good fit in your company since my experience is in the same industry. I have had an experience of 5 years in Hot & Spicy, a famous food chain of Pakistan, as Manager Accounts and Finance. The operations and accounting treatments of the industry are the same; hence, I could be an excellent choice to add value to your company.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Rehan Yousaf
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to you to remind you about ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le we both were travelling last week. I would like to start with my introducti...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uld like to start with my introduction. I am Rehan Yousaf, and I shared a flight ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...relevant field in the hotel industry. I believe I can be a good fit in your co...
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Line 13, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my experience is in the same industry. I have had an experience of 5 years in Ho...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... choice to add value to your company. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Rehan Yousaf
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you. Yours sincerely Rehan Yousaf
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, while, mind you, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69587628866 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88116602884 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.893696789 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173115133024 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594777732004 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697730025426 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115528462365 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672301167158 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.