Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement in industrialisation, the crime ratio is increasing exponentially. Although some believe that increasing offences in this world cannot be controlled. I, however, think that this can be tackled with improvement in two major areas.
Firstly, the prosecution system in the countries must be robust to control this issue. To elaborate, although I concede that most of the countries on this planet are facing the pressing issue of either weak or slow jurisdiction system, which allows many miscreants to take advantage of this weakness. This fragility; however, can overcome to generate the fear of punishment in offenders; hence, they will get reluctant while committing crimes. For instance, Saudia Arabia is well-known for its strong legal and execution system and its clampdown on criminals. Therefore, Saudia Arabia has consistently been ranking as one of the safest countries on this planet from two decades.
Another area which can have profound impacts in tackling this grave issue is the use of technology. It could be argued that many developing nations do not possess enough financial and technological resources. However, I would argue that even the minimal use of technology, if effective, can control crimes to a great extent. For instance, building safe cities by installing security cameras are not really expensive; however, the utility it provides in controlling crime ratio is unmatchable. Therefore, technology, if uses effectively, can minimise the number of offences in the cities.
To conclude, not only does the weak legal system motivate offenders to commit crimes, but it also increases the ratio of offences in the contemporary world. Therefore, although I acknowledge that the use of technology demands financial resources, I disagree that crimes can not be prevented.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49110320285 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06471198788 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0715338675 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163469989526 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591483740382 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474367413299 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109885911111 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432856369565 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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