You would like to attend a training course. Write a letter to your company manager. In your letter, you should say:
why you would like to attend this course?
why it would be beneficial for you and the company?
suggest how to arrange time for it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my interest in the upcoming training program which will be conducted by the Institute of charted certified accountants. I came to know about the training from the advertisement in the newspaper.
The training will be covering the latest amendments in the reporting requirements of the Real-estate by International accounting board. Since you know the company is going to inaugurate the real estate project soon, these amendments will help us to fulfil the requirements of securities and exchange commission of Pakistan. This training will also equip me with enough knowledge to solve the upcoming reporting challenges.
The training is going to start next Monday, at 4 ‘clock. So, I request you to please allow me to leave the office an hour early. I assure you that daily tasks will be completed till 4 O’clock. In case, If any tasks, by any chance, remains pending, Mr Kamran will complete that task in my absence.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rehan Yousaf
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| 2019-10-24 | Rehan Yousaf | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...m the advertisement in the newspaper. The training will be covering the latest...
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...e the upcoming reporting challenges. The training is going to start next Mond...
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...ill complete that task in my absence. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21511627907 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99126070688 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633720930233 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8159349628 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164580723942 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635127604034 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040191011609 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102529263809 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153140726718 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.