A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month is planning to stay with you, but you can’t accommodate her. Write a letter to her:
Tell her the reasons
Apologize
Make alternative arrangements
Dear Emily,
How’re you?
It’s been a long time since we saw each other, and I hope you’re doing fine in this period. I’m extremely happy to hear that you are planning to visit India next month for your vacation and want to stay with me. But, I’m sorry because I won’t be able to accommodate you at my apartment.
Let me shed some light on my helplessness. I’ve to go for six months long business trip to the US for our upcoming project. So, I decided to vacate the house since there was no point in paying the rent of the apartment for this time period. I’ll look for a new residence once I’ll be back from my trip.
If I had received your letter a little earlier, then I would have delayed the lease of my apartment by one more month. I hope you’ll get it and will be okay with it.
I know a few guest houses which have an English speaking staff as well. They also provide commutation and a tourist guide services which are is inclusive in the per day room price. Once you confirm, I can make bookings for the length of your stay in one of these hotels.
Best wishes,
Ruchi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31730769231 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22743035939 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701923076923 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.518126813 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1428571429 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18563987073 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060374808451 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707858832092 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110744633508 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682524307754 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.