A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
suggest an interesting part of the city to live in
describe the public transport in your city
say how your friend can meet new people there
Dear Nisha,
I am very happy to hear that you are relocating to Bangalore and my heartiest congratulations on clearing the final round of SAP.
As you would know by now that the office of SAP is in Bellandur, it would be a very good idea to stay nearby. Bellandur is the information technology hub of Bangalore and you will find many major offices located near to your office. It has plenty of options for food and accommodation with varied ranges of prices and quality.
Now coming to public transport, unfortunately, Bangalore has an extremely pathetic system. There are plenty of buses connecting different parts of the city. However, they are always crowded. There are metro service as well in the city. The timings of the train are well suited to the office commuters. Another option that is very popular with people in Bangalore is the carpool system. I will help you in registering in the mobile application and selecting a suitable plan.
Lastly, knowing that you are a very outgoing person, I would recommend you in joining some hobby clubs in the place. Bangalore has plenty of clubs which people often join to meet new people and spend some quality time outside work. I am absolutely confident that you will find something that matches your interests. You can also meet people in your shared living places and carpools. Hoping to see you soon.
Regards,
Madhulika
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87288135593 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64016715757 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5811317235 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.875 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143873239588 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420143621103 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517253275103 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758096347429 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468679359113 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.