A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1. give contact details for when you are away
2. give instructions about how to care for your pet
3. describe other household duties
Dear Ben,
How have you been? It was a great relief that you agreed to housesit to take care of my dog, Snowy while I will be away on an emergency business trip. To elucidate, if this would not be such an important joint venture, I would not have agreed to go. I will be staying at Nanyang Hotel, Thailand and you can reach me either on What's App or at the hike. If I change my location, I shall inform you accordingly.
Please feed snowy three times a day and put some fresh water in its bowl. His food is kept in the kitchen right beside the microwave. Make sure he finishes his food and take him for a walk twice a day. Apart from taking care of snowy, I would request you to do help me out with some other household chores like watering the plants and taking care of the house. Plants in the lounge area are succulents so they don’t need water daily, once in a week is sufficient for them and the plants in the garden area need water on a regular basis in the evening. Also switch-off the light otherwise snowy will not be able to sleep and clean the dustbins on a regular basis.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Cheers
Den
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...Thailand and you can reach me either on Whats App or at the hike. If I change my loca...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ater on a regular basis in the evening. Also switch-off the light otherwise snowy wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, look, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22831050228 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18618959595 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8128018161 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118928604583 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417193207779 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379005612986 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902490214257 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193280308499 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.