A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Mike,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. First of all thanks for agreeing to look after my house and pet for a few days while I am away on holiday. Additionally, I wanted to write back to you in reference to give out detailed instructions so that you have a pleasant stay. Allow me to explain in detail.
To elucidate I will be staying at Hotel Mexican Plaza for three days in Bali and would be reachable on +62984 for any urgent matters. Although my Singapore number will also be reachable it’s better to call me on +62984. I am also sure that you will love the company of my pet dog but you need to make sure that you feed him dog food and milk twice a day moreover you also need to take him out in the morning and evenings. The dog food is kept in the kitchen shelf which is located on side of the refrigerator.
For the household duties please make sure that you sprinkle some water on the plants in the garden everyday especially the rose flowers additionally make sure that maid mops the floor properly. If you need clarity on anything else please call me.
Once again I am greatful to you for looking after my house and pet.
Warm wishes
Said
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-03-29 | SamNiz | 73 | view |
| 2019-03-29 | vinshu koul | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
^^^
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... some water on the plants in the garden everyday especially the rose flowers additionall...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sure that maid mops the floor properly. If you need clarity on anything else pleas...
^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng after my house and pet. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32142857143 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31262065322 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4080820418 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288319834054 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956842271444 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893843808264 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199460238833 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135330665525 0.0580467560999 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.