A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Ben,
Hope you are doing well. Although it has been a hectic last week as I have been preparing for my vacation to Bali on the other hand, it has been a great relief to hear that you will be coming to Sydney to take care of my apartment and snowy. I want to thank you for this kind gesture.
First and foremost I wanted to provide you with a list of instructions which will your life much easier while you stay at my home. I will be taking my mobile number along so I will be reachable on the same number. Please text me on Viber or we chat as I prefer to text rather than calls. Secondly, you will need to feed snowy milk and pedigree twice a day. The dog food along with some utensils are kept in the cabin located in the balcony. Additionally, you can also feed him boiled chicken some times which is kept in the refrigerator. Don’t worry about taking snowy out as Smith will come every day and take him for morning and evening walks.
Lastly, there is some technical issue with the microwave oven and I have asked a local technician to visit fix the problem. I will provide him with your contact number and he will coordinate with you.
I hope you have a pleasant stay and do text me in the case of an emergency.
Best regards
Saad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24583333333 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22672763764 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595833333333 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9318328938 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7857142857 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149519076125 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507971459432 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052253663495 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886743321702 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293851460883 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.