A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
-describe other household duties.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to express my gratification that you have agreed to take care of my house and my pet when I am on holiday.
I will be visiting Singapore, an island city from 14th September till 28th September with my friends. It is a very beautiful place with many tourist attractions such as the Sentosa Beach, National Museum of Singapore, Bird Park and Night Safari. If you wish to contact me regarding some issues, I will be available on 9885554655 number.
Rodger is a well-trained and mannered dog and will not disturb you in any way. Please feed him with dog food three times a day and bath him once in two days. Additionally, take him for morning and evening walk as he loves to go outside and play.
Besides Rodger please water my plants daily as it is very hot outside and furthermore, kindly check my mail box everyday as it gets filled with newsletters an advertisement. If you find any letter which is important please keep it in my study table drawer
Once again I am very thankful that you to have given you consent of looking after my home and my dog.
Take care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Anna, Hello, how are you? Hope you are having ...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... house and my pet when I am on holiday. I will be visiting Singapore, an island ...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will be available on 9885554655 number. Rodger is a well-trained and mannered do...
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Line 15, column 113, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d furthermore, kindly check my mail box everyday as it gets filled with newsletters an a...
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Line 15, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lled with newsletters an advertisement. If you find any letter which is important ...
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Line 27, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... care and see you soon. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Line 29, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60633484163 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5143554998 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1199118102 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3076923077 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145986312702 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544124093401 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055161831012 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865889501532 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617316216857 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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