A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
-describe other household duties.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to express my gratification that you have agreed to take care of my house and my pet when I am on holiday.
I will be in London from 14th September till 28th September for a business meeting. If you wish to contact me regarding any issues, I will be available on London number you can call me or drop a text message anytime. However, you can also send me an E-Mail.
Rodger is a well-trained and mannered dog and will not disturb you in any way. Please feed him with dog food three times a day and bath him once in two days. Additionally, take him for morning and evening walk as he loves to go outside and play.
Besides Rodger please water my plants daily as it is very hot outside and furthermore, kindly check my mail box everyday as it gets filled with newsletters an advertisement. If you find any letter which is important please keep it in my study table drawer
Once again, I am very thankful that you to have given you consent of looking after my home and my dog.
Take care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Anna, Hello, how are you? Hope you are having ...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... house and my pet when I am on holiday. I will be in London from 14th September ...
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Line 17, column 113, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d furthermore, kindly check my mail box everyday as it gets filled with newsletters an a...
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Line 17, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lled with newsletters an advertisement. If you find any letter which is important ...
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Line 29, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... care and see you soon. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Line 31, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47887323944 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41939418599 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62441314554 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.910664913 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3846153846 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171161764484 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618819886779 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508003753426 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956773144081 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561200650882 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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