A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem, explain what happened to you in the past, and suggest possible solutions to the problem. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in great health and metal peace. First of all, Congratulation on your new role! I know it is completely different from your previous experience, I had same situation six month back so I can easily put myself in your shoes.
When I moved to sales department, I was horrified initially as I had no prior experience about the field. So I requested thorough knowledge transfer sessions from management, which certainly had helped me enormously to strengthen my grip over the division. Furthermore, I started referring popular sales book to get familiar with its terminology. And, with trial and error, over the time, I’m completely comfortable in this role and see very bright future.
Why don’t you try to get sessions from your existing team? In that way, you’d understand that how things work in the sales, especially in your team. I happened to come across several useful websites, which has excellent tutorials that can help you get going. I will share with you all the material that I have collected along with list of the websites.
I hope this will be helpful to you and wish you luck for the new endeavor.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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- Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing.Explain where, when and why. 89
- It is believed that culture and tradition are lost when it is exposed for earning money However others believe it important part of promotion Discuss and give your opinion 90
- some people think that large international sporting events only brings drawbacks, and that it is not worth hosting them.Do you agree or disagree? 89
- Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work and retire earlier.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...us experience, I had same situation six month back so I can easily put myself in your...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed along with list of the websites. I hope this will be helpful to you and wi...
^
Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he new endeavor. Best wishes, Sandip
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92270531401 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73134474445 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676328502415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5345200717 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3846153846 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252303785337 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878324843964 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688811418216 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162457234784 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828956230082 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.