A friend, who lives in another country, has invited to you come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: –
thank him/her for the invitation
explain why you cannot come
ask for his suggestion when you can come
Dear Mathew,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I would like to thank you for the application of my tourist visa and an invitation to spend the summer holidays in Singapore. I believe it will be a great opportunity for me to explore different facades of diverse culture, especially in a foreign country. I appreciate this kind gesture but unfortunately, I cannot come. Let me elucidate the situation.
Lately, my reporting manager has resigned on a short notice thus most of his responsibilities have been passed on to me by the management as the company cannot find a suitable replacement in a short span of time. For most of the summer, I will be occupied with additional projects and thus cannot find time to travel.
Shall I plan a short trip in winters as I would have less workload towards the end of the year? I did some research online and found that the weather is pleasant in Singapore throughout the year. Please suggest so that I can plan my itinerary accordingly.
I look forward to your immediate response and seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lture, especially in a foreign country. I appreciate this kind gesture but unfort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7277486911 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84214600612 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8101952973 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174205285497 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577881040697 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724945205023 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107147657376 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898886811665 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.