A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, telling them about these things. In your mail,
• Say what these things are
• Say why they are interesting/enjoyable
• Suggest what you can do together
Hello Jude,
I feel so excited that you’d be visiting London very soon. This gives us another opportunity to share memories and I have no doubt you’d enjoy the various activities we’d occupy ourselves with when you arrive.
If I can remember clearly, tennis was your favorite sporting activity in high school and you’d get the opportunity to show us our class. Also, we often organize weekend parties which every family in the community attend with the Spark Musical Group being our special guest.
We have a tennis tournament that is attended by neighboring community. This is the largest in the state with up to six thousand people in attendance with prize money of 3,000 USD. Also, the weekend party has a Karaoke section where you can exhibit your singing skills. You’d get the opportunity to make lots of friends because you enjoy socializing.
What if we organize a social gathering for the less privileged when you arrive? You’ve always enjoyed charity activities and this will be another opportunity for you to do things you love.
See you soon.
Cheers,
Azuka
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i feel, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09392265193 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51001473848 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2777686524 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260959627736 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980359412682 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832598298209 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160262234493 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625219549844 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.